Visual: I am waiting on the visual, most likely a text book.
Headline: Coffee and Calculus
Subhead: Need help in calc? get up early and get a head start on the trig your gonna need.
Swing Line: Coming this fall:
Body Copy: Trigonometry for Calculus Mat 1430. Doctor Kevin Farrell will guide you through the trig that you are going to need for pre-calc and calc.
Who: You
What: MAT 1430
Where: Lyndon State College Vail Building Room 449
When: Fall 2010. Wednesday 7:30 a.m. to 8:25 a.m.
Why: Cause you might need a refresher in trigonometry.
Zinger:
don't be dumb, get the help(?)
Call to action: Register today, for more info see Kevin Farrell.
There are no mandatories and I have yet to think of a logo.
Tuesday, April 13, 2010
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Headline: It just occurred to me -- you can't bring drinks into Vail 449, where the class will probably be held. Got an alternate?
ReplyDeleteSubhead: You don't need the line "Need help in calc?" Assume the reader needs help. Don't forget spelling and style: you're (instead of your); MAT instead of Mat.
Where: Do you need Lyndon State College? Will the ad go anywhere but the Critic?
Why: Avoid words like "might." Either the reader does or doesn't. Assume he/she does.
Zinger: "Don't be dumb" is too harsh.
You should use the LSC logo.